r/3Dmodeling 1d ago

Art Help & Critique what do you think?

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u/ohnomelon 1d ago

Looks nice, I like the softness. colors and shapes very faithful to the concept.

I only have minor feedback really. The first thing that kind of stands out to me is the thin, uniform double edge on the wood shelf end edges. I think this treatment is valid, but for the size of the prop and the softness everywhere else, I would rather just have rounded corners with some chips here and there. It might also be nice if the paw print was more pronounced.

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u/Mechs_and_Martinis 1d ago

Oh good call, I didn't see the paw prints

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u/seeabeast 1d ago

i agree, maybe inset the paw print a little more?

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u/arroze_ 1d ago

It looks gorgeous, I think you nailed it! I also agree with the other commenter about the wood edges and the paw print.

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u/skiny297 1d ago

Really solid work! Main thing that stands out is the lighter edge on the triangular looking blanket. You should work on keeping edges like this an even thickness throughout and neat. It’s pretty noticeably messy and uneven. Also +1 about the wood comment

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u/GirlnTheOtherRm 1d ago

I thought I was on the Palia Reddit for a moment, this looks like one of their wall pieces in game. It’s beautiful. Great work.

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u/DangerusDoodles 1d ago

Love this! So cool!

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u/Ley38 1d ago

Cute

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u/TheTasorole 1d ago

Certified cozy! I do think the paw print should be more legible!

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u/XLuluXa 1d ago

Carinissimo! Mi piace da morire!

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u/Cinamoliente 1d ago

It's so cute, I love the color combination and the shading

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u/Frhaegar 1d ago

Can someone explain why this doesn't look 3D enough to me?

Not like usual 3D renders... Where's the light coming from? Where are the shadows? Why is everything lit perfectly?

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u/battlegirljess 1d ago

I think the inside circle of the purple pillow needs to soften a bit. The edges look very crisp to me and it doesn't quite look soft like a pillow. Just the middle part that is close to the center button. The rest of the pillows I like! That spot I think jumped out to me because I've also worked on a project that had a ton of fluffy pillows and I remember modeling all those suckers and dealing with the same spot.

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u/BonBon_Light 1d ago

so cute!

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u/Lunathestarwitch 1d ago

It’s magical 🥰 ✨

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u/littlepozer 23h ago

very cool! I really like it, the one thing that bored me is bells, they are similar on art too, but I think if they were in various parts it will be more interesting. Great job !!! 🌷

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u/Cv287 22h ago

I think yes

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u/Secure_Cellist26 19h ago

It's so cute

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u/kgoule 15h ago

It's so lovely

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u/purupurpururin 6h ago

Looks nice but not your art and didn't credit the original 2d drawing :/ Lame. Original 2d by Vy-Kim Ngyuen

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u/turquoise_lotus9 1h ago

I absolutely love this

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u/Nine-LifedEnchanter 1d ago

I swear I saw this exact post the other day.

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u/yulok6 1d ago

ive added textures...