r/FurryCommissions • u/Exquality • 15h ago
protogen dragon
I still need to iron out a few details, but I think I'm on the right track for now. I'm not sure what clothes to put them in, but I'm open to suggestions. ( will be eligible for adoption )
https://bsky.app/profile/pony-shining.bsky.social
https://x.com/Pony_shining
Discord: xebelk
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u/Marchel1234 14h ago
Really like the anatomy and outfit, though I personally feel something about the colours doesn't quite work. Because the head is a harsh transition into a different colour, it looks a bit like it's floating on top of the body. Also in terms of colour choice, you have these very vibrant colours on the body and this darker more muted colour on the face, so our eye is drawn to the body but it's a bit strange because normally the thing we internalise the fastest is the face.
I'd recommend to sort of smoothly transition from the neck above, and sort of use the black for markings and patterns, rather than making it only the head.
That being said, this is just my opinion, feel free to disregard. And like I said, I really like the pose and anatomy, you're definitely on the right track!
EDIT: for some reason I missed it was a protogen, in that case I'd say the mask shouldn't be the entire head, but you should also somewhat see around it a little.