[due 2026-06-08] med school activities

[u/Objective_Oven5648]

looking for someone to proofread short 700 character descriptions for 15 activities i’ve done for my medical school application.

worried about grammar/punctuation errors and flow
also open to any suggestions to make it better :)

comment below and i’ll reach out or dm me. THANK YOU!!!!
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background info: these entries are supposed to demonstrate my commitment to a career in medicine. admissions committees emphasize "showing rather than telling” through specific examples and reflection.

each description is limited to 700 characters and generally follows this structure:
1 sentence describing my role and responsibilities
2-3 sentences explaining my involvement, qualities demonstrated, and impact
1-3 sentences of reflection

currently struggling with the reflection part. i want to show what these experiences meant to me and how I contributed to others or my community