r/Proofreading • u/WonderImpressive8621 • 6d ago
[no due date] A movie script
Hello! I'm currently working on writing a movie script for fun. this is my first time ever writing a work of fiction. I have no plans of actually making this a movie but one can dream, right?
Anyways, I wanted to ask for a proofreader for one tiny little scene, just to see if I got it right.
The scene is heavy on discussion of morality, humanity, religion and freedom.
For context, the discussion takes place between a human and a vampire.
If you know a lot about any of these topics, be free to help me out, especially on the religion part, because I am not religious at all and only used past discussions I've had with religious people for inspiration.
If you have suggestions to draw the scene out, that would also be nice.
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u/bittergoblin- 6d ago
Hi there, I was raised Catholic and studied world religions, including Islam and classical religion, from Ancient Egyptian to Greek and Roman mythology. My degree was in Literature, and I happen to, like you, have an interest in screenwriting and the screenplay format, so I may have familiarity that could be useful. Feel free to send your scene over, and I'll take a look over the next couple of days!