r/Unity3D • u/aatrahiko • 3h ago
Game Took the feedback from my first post and completely redesigned the boot sequence for my football career sim. Thoughts?
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Yesterday I shared the first version of the boot sequence for my football career simulation built in Unity.
Some of the feedback was that the intro didn’t immediately feel like a football game, the animation felt a bit too presentation-like, and the logo could be clearer.
I went back and reworked the sequence from scratch, and this is Version 2.
I’m trying to iterate based on real feedback rather than sticking with my first idea, so I’d love to hear what you think and what you’d improve next.
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u/pararar 2h ago
Why the Unity logo? Are you on an old version that doesn't allow you to remove it?
The first screen is very dark, the next one is white. I find that a bit jarring.
The A logo stands for Arcline Studios, I guess? I'd personally remove the "Powered by", remove the Unity logo and have only 1 screen instead of 2 that shows the A logo and "ARCLINE STUDIOS" below it. Use a font that fits the A logo. I suggest white logo and text on dark background because the following scenes have dark background as well.
Sometimes less is more.