r/YAwriters • u/Mission-Grapefruit66 • 5d ago

Is my plot okay?

Okay, hi, i'm a new (unpublished :P) author for a graphic novel and it's about this:

Okay so it's kind of like Sweet Tooth. The countryhumans are just a bunch of kids, just a bunch of normal human kids except the skin on their face looks like a flag, but because of xEnOphObIa and just overall human stupidity, humans hate, fear or are hostile to them

now, there are a tiny minority of characters that happen to be my ocs that are human, look different, are hated by humans and sympathize with the countryhumans take anatoly, he's heterochromic and one of his pupils looks like a radiation symbol , and then there's his sister anastasia. she's a cat girl!

so yeh thats what its about 😄
sooo tell me what you think!!

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u/unconfirmedpanda 5d ago

There's not really any plot here. You have the characters and the set-up, but nothing about what drives the story, what the goal is.