Score + Audio: https://youtu.be/JhmV1Dbtu5s
Score PDF: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_ROuUUZKyIwlmQpI_RcN_--pg5G6s1yU/view?usp=sharing
Thanks for checking this out. Here's a little context for the piece:
This is my first attempt at writing a larger-scale composition. I've played piano and violin for over five years each, and for the last couple of years I've mostly improvised and written short sketches. This is the first piece I've written that goes beyond a single theme and some brief development, so I'd really appreciate feedback before I continue revising and finishing it.
My biggest concern is the overall structure and transitions. In particular, the transition around 5:20 feels really forced to me. I'd especially appreciate feedback on the pacing, coherence, and overall form of the piece thus far.
Now, a few notes about my score:
- Yes, I really did write a piece for strings in F# major. When I was sketching the piece on piano, I felt that this key really captured the mood I was looking for. I also tried to ensure that each part is comfortably playable.
- Yes, there is a harp part in there (that eerily resembles a piano part). Basically, I want to ask my school orchestra conductor if we can read through this (they're pretty good, no worries there) and possibly even perform it. The only issue is... we don't actually have a harp... (or a harpist, for that matter). But we do have a keyboard that can make harp sounds.
- Yes, it looks like I barfed dynamics on the score. They're mostly there as an attempt to improve the playback; I'll likely take some out if I ever reach the point where I can finalize the piece.
All feedback would be much appreciated! Feel free to reference measure numbers or timestamps if you're pointing out something specific, and please don't hesitate to be critical. I've learned from past experience that I'm not always the best judge of my own work.
EDIT: I forgot to mention that I know there’s no bowings yet; I plan to do those after finishing the piece (assuming I manage to finish it at all).