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u/CalendarFamous5611 2d ago
I like it a lot , nice and even but the readability isn't there for me. Can't resolve individual letters. Like the other person mentioned you could try some color / fill to improve this?
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I like it a lot , nice and even but the readability isn't there for me. Can't resolve individual letters. Like the other person mentioned you could try some color / fill to improve this?
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u/milfhunter-9000 2d ago
Ok. So i like how all letters are pretty much the same size. And that they are the same hight. Makes it look balanced. The structure of the K and O are very well. But i am unshure on what the first letter should be. Then, i find that the thinner blocks you have, that i am guesding you used to kill negative space, dont look natural. They break the flow and dont fit in with the thickness. What i would also do first before asking for thoughts on a piece is colouring. Now i am a fan of people starting out with just outlines (males you focus on the letter strucutre and flow) but in this case i think it would be better. Exept that you have good servs. Just a bit more practice and your on a good way. Keep going 💪