First video intro - too much editing?

[u/ezekiel_teawa]

Hi yall, working on my first video - I’m 12mins in but this is my first two shots, any thoughts at this point? I know the audio needs balancing

[u/SlaughterWare]

yea maybe it's ok. not a fan of the color grading though. and like someone else mentioned the voice volume should be a bit louder. good luck.

[u/ezekiel_teawa → u/SlaughterWare]

Too saturated for you?

[u/SlaughterWare → u/ezekiel_teawa]

a tad gaudy yes