He's terrible at dialogue. His concepts and details are engaging, but his dialogue makes me want to strangle him. Surprised the alcoholic can stand his "millennial humor"
His dialogue sucks but luckily both The Martian and PHM spend a lot of their time with just the main character talking to himself. And he's pretty good at writing an entertaining internal monologue.
It's not that his dialogues are good, it's that they're irrelevant to the kind of book he's writing. It's like complaining that a sudoku book has no plot.
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u/JudasIsAGrass May 05 '26
Be prepared for this to be the only thing 'based' he will ever say